Hammond House Shortlist
My story Invisible Tyranny has been shortlisted for the Hammond House prize!
(Update: I didn’t progress further – but I’ll be in the anthology.)
I'm a retired civil servant in Surrey, UK and long-time blogger. These days I'm spending more time writing stories and doing other creative stuff
My story Invisible Tyranny has been shortlisted for the Hammond House prize!
(Update: I didn’t progress further – but I’ll be in the anthology.)
I am among the finalists for the Eyelands awards for the second year running, this time for ‘Antediluvian Quest’!
Results on 30 December.
Rather slim pickings this month for competitions – December always seems to be quiet, especially in the UK. Perhaps everyone is saving their creative energy for really great Christmas cards? Anyway, here we are.
The rest all have deadlines of 31 December, possibly something to fill those empty days between Christmas and New Year.
So ends another year of authorial competition. Merry Christmas!
My Woking friend Heather Cook is having a Zoom launch for her first poetry pamphlet ‘Out of the Ordinary’ on 2 December, hosted by Wildfire Words. There are some 2 minute open mic slots for anyone who’d like to read a short poem or two and I’ll be doing a couple of sonnets (he said negligently, as though he wrote sonnets all the time). Free tickets to attend or read (all online) can be booked here https://wildfire-words.com/heather-cook/#book-launch
We went to see the National Gallery’s blockbuster exhibition of the work of Frans Hals, a good follow-up to our visit to his museum in Haarlem (and in fact we met a few old friends again).
Hals is notable for the lively characterisation of his portraits. A note in the exhibition rightly says that nobody painted nonchalance like Hals, but his people are also completely believable and full of energy.







He’s also known for the loose style he adopted, especially in his later years, when a few slashing diagonal strokes of the brush would skilfully suggest lace or fabric. It was this trait that endeared him to Van Gogh and other later painters. Look at how the details of this gent, convincing at a distance, are just rough and sketchy brushstrokes close up.


A selection of writing competitions I might enter during the coming month.
First, a few with deadlines on 1 November.
The rest have a deadline of 30th November.
If you get somewhere with one of these, please let me know!
I was shortlisted this year – they say that means in the top 2%, so not bad.
A belated hat-tip to the British Museum’s exhibition of artefacts from the last century of the Chinese Empire – here called the Hidden Century, but also known as the Century of Humiliation because of the way China was forced to accept the domination of people it had regarded as marginal barbarians.
This picture of Queen Victoria might symbolise the encroachment of the West, and of course we are reminded that many Chinese artefacts now in the West were frankly looted during the Boxer War or at other times.
If there’s a single message from the exhibition it might be that Chinese culture remained vibrant and productive, even benefiting from some Western influences. Here are some random items that caught my eye.





Here are the writing competitions I might enter with deadlines in October.
The rest of the list have a deadline of 31 October.
If you get somewhere with any of the contests above, do let me know!
I am reading Eleanor Catton’s Birnam Wood. I am only a short way into it, but it’s very good, and I should say, very well written.
The thing is, there are great slabs of text, weighty paragraphs, in which she does absolutely nothing but tell you directly what characters are feeling, how their personality works, and what their inner perceptions and experiences are.
Does she lose us? Do these passages lack an essential vividness? No, they are clever, interesting and skilfully done, like good portraiture. Is the book a failure? No, it’s the Sunday Times Bestseller by the Booker Prize Winning Author. Maybe, though, reviews pick up on her weak writing style? On the contrary. The Guardian says Technically, it’s another virtuoso performance.
Yet you and I know that if I presented anything like this to a writing tutor or an editor, either of whom would charge substantial fees for their expert advice, I’d be told Oh dear, Peter! Let me explain the concept of ‘show, don’t tell’. Here are a couple of remedial exercises to help you grasp it.